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Many Questions, Few Answers

New Stories Illustrate the Predicament of Texas Writing

The Woman in the Oil Field
by Tracy Daugherty
SMU 191 pages. $22.50

I'm looking for a metaphore. Diamonds in a cow patty isn't quite it. Perhaps, garnets in a schist, or to take a cue from Daugherty's title story, a producing well in a marginal field. No, no, a pearl: something special in the center with hard, almost impenetrable stuff at the beginning and the end.

The pearl is a series of four short stories which would be a novella if it were all from the same point of view. It is on a reliable theme: the rivalry of a son, Robert, with his famous and estranged father, Frederick; and it has a few reliable clichés: they both are attracted to the same woman. The novel thing is that they are artists (that is to say, painters) and most of the story is in Houston, where the combination of enormous wealth and modern art has created a Byzantine of intrigues of one-upmanship.

…the Cultural Arts Council of Houston had commissioned a skyline portrait from the city's famous son. Frederick was nervous about it—normally he didn't work on commission, but this was for a celebration of Texas images, and Frederick was touched to be included…Eventually he produced a large abstract canvass of brown, orange and gray. Houston Colors he called it. The Arts Council was thrilled.

That is a much richer story for anyone with the vaguest grasp of Houston art history, but that story has been told for ages under the title, "The Emperor's New Clothes."


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Robert who believes he is being cuckolded, finds all kinds of images of potency or the lack of it in the work and goes mad—or else gets the flu. It is all very sordid and artistic


We have met the father Frederick in New York (where somehow he manages to obtain El Patio TV dinners) as he is diagnosed with cancer. The son confronts the Times obituary which makes clear that Frederick was not in the first rank of American artists—not good news for Robert, who has not gotten so far as the father. The son has never had much of the father. Frederick left his wife and Houston early in Robert's life, and father and son seem to have connected only twice: Robert at fifteen took an art class Frederick taught and Frederick bedded the female student Robert had his eye on; and again when the father returned to M.D. Anderson for his final treatment and his death. The father's final work, a collage, arrives from New York. It is representational, meaning it contains recognizable images, and Robert who believes he is being cuckolded finds all kinds of images of potency or the lack of it in the work and goes mad—or else gets the flu.

It is all very sordid and artistic.

At any rate, it could have been a kunstlerroman, if it had been set up properly from Robert's point of view. Why it wasn't, I think, is revealed with an examination of the oyster shell around this pearl.

The landscape of all these stories is bleak and barren. Evidently this is the thing in experimental literature: to be laconic to the point of incomprehensibility. Hardly any of these stories is more sparse than "Akhmotova's Notebook: 1940." The story line, although substantial enough to support a novel, has to be discovered from the jacket notes. Akhmotova is the legendary Russian poet, who has somehow offended Stalin sufficiently that her son has been made a hostage. Who is she? What did she write? Why doesn't Stalin simply dispose of her? What does she feel? We won't learn any of this from Daugherty, who is content to rely on the biographical background, outside the story to do his work for him. Eventually the poet writes a suitable paean to the Party, the son is freed, and we have one of the few glimpses of a flesh-and-blood character in this whole collection: the son is not entirely reconciled to suffering nobly for his mother's art. If only the mother were as human.

I must admit that I am no fan of the Literary story, which is to say, no fan of stories without stories. As for the school of thought that a short story ought to be a character study, I think that is all very well provided we do have a character to study. Perhaps the idea of character development seems a little too similar to the vulgar, bourgeois notion of plot, but if we are to have character, sliced thin from time as if for electron microscopy, then it seems to me we ought to have some insight from the fine detail. So why isn't some of that here?

What the FBI wants to know, in "The Observatory," is why an amateur astronomer in Houston is getting letters from a Middle Eastern terrorist/freedom-fighter. A very good question. Yes, the astronomer knew her, slept with her, but that is not the answer to how or why anyone he could have met or known, anyone he could describe as an American beauty is overseas and writing to him about pipebombs.

I cannot help suspecting that the answer to all of these unanswered questions is that the author does not know. He is not being coy. He has no idea who any of these people are or what they are doing. He doesn't know why one of them is crawling under cars on a winter's night in Bowling Green, Ohio looking for cats with supernumerary toes. He doesn't know why another is a poet, much less a poet political enough to offend Stalin. Dialogue comes in short, jerky snippets because the author doesn't know what the characters are feeling and what they would say about their feelings if they had any.


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When the oil boom was really on, Texas literature was about cattle brands and cattle drives and cattle trails. We didn't have the oil boom stories until the oil boom was history


But there is a larger mystery, one that I doubt any author has the solution to anymore, and that is: what is Texas literature? For several generations Texas writing has been backward-looking. When the oil boom was really on, Texas literature was about cattle brands and cattle drives and cattle trails. We didn't have the oil boom stories until the oil boom was history.

If there is to be anything of Texas literature when the nation seems divided into only two regions—largely interchangeable suburbs and inner cities—Daugherty is well placed to create it. He is a Midland native, with two degrees from S.M.U. and a Ph.D. from the University of Houston. Is there anywhere to look for Texas except backwards? There is a bit of this question in the title story of the collection.

Grandmother is in a nursing home and quite senile. She mistakes our protagonist for his grandfather. In the modern world, legendary times are but two generations ago, so family "legend" has it, that grandfather ran off with a prostitute who was working the oil fields. If there are any native Texans left, a skeleton in the closet taking the form of an oil field woman will not seem especially farfetched to them. But that's just it—Daugherty's story never becomes anything more than the failing memory of an old woman in a nursing home.


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